Score: 7

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submission: DevilSlayer II

date: October 29, 2008

Music was too loud.
Voice acting was low quality.
Animation was ok, but could have been alot better.
The story is ok, not my kind of thing, but well done for this genre.

The fight scene was poorly done.

Score: 10

"10/10 5/5"

submission: Ghost Crush.

date: October 29, 2008

The animation is some of the best I've ever seen.
Music fits the video perfectly.
The theme is played out perfectly.

Simple in concept, but good job on this. You're very talented.

Score: 8

"8/10"

submission: Bird Skipper (Part 1)

date: October 15, 2008

So far so good!

That song at the end reminds me of the gay rape scene in Pulp Fiction though...

Animation: 2
Sound: 2
Humor: 2
Length so far: 2

And... you know what the -2's for...>.>

Score: 7

"7/10 4/5"

submission: [SxE] One And Only

date: October 6, 2008

It seems like a mix of USBM, video game(i.e. Doom) rock/metal, and it's got some elements of DnB/Industrial. Very odd mix of music. Very well done.

I don't know enough about making music that I can give you any technical advice on how to improve, but here's a list of pros and cons that might help for future works:

Cons:
1. The drum part is too simple and repetitive
2. At 1:45, the guitar comes in too suddenly
3. At 1:45, and on, the guitar part is too simple, and it almost sounds like it's out of tune to me
4. The song is repetitive at times
Pros:
1. Overall it's got great rythm and bass
2. The progression is, overall, smooth
3. 0:01-0:30 reminds me of Doom (and that makes me smile :)

Summary: It's a good song, but it's rough. With some more time into this, and your talent, this could easily be a 10.